rhyme stuff Posted by poolboyjames on April 30, 2010 at 2:42 PM comments (0)i was lookin at some stuff i wrote in class over the semester
i saw a few decent examples of what i want to do on my next cd here's some stuff i liked i'm alone at all times of the week/ i just zone and talk rhymes on a beat/ i don't pout about the plights that i live with/ i zone out and just write what i'm given/ a lone child with clear sight for my vision/ its on now in here, i'm gnna win this/ basically, what i like about this sort of style is the rhymes match in meter for each line and its not just the end of the line its each stressed word of each sentence.. the rhymes match in vowel sounds not necessarily consonants like analyze the first 2 lines for example i'm - a - lone - at - all - times - of - the - week/ i - just - zone - and - talk - rhymes - on - a - beat/ each vowel sound matches the one below it i hope to do this on my new project like throughout the whole thing as much as possible.. at the same time i hope to make sense, and tell stories and give some real substance i'm really hoping to be able to do some big things with my new project!!!! i feel like i've developed a signature rhyme style but i am hoping to basically take it much further this time!!! curse word chat Posted by poolboyjames on April 30, 2010 at 3:01 AM comments (0)i really don't like how so much music is so dirty
if u guys feel the same as i do then make sure u keep up with me here on the site cuz all my music is going to be clean (i'm referring to my new cd.. u already know my older stuff is clean) i like to acknowledge negativity but not revel in it u know what i mean? i really don't get what the point is with rappers cursing all the time i use curse-words on my blog but that's me quickly venting when i speak in person i don't do that.. and i've never really done it in music i've used curse-words in music before.. like some of my first rhymes were filled with them but i decided early on that i wanted to be really good at writing lyrics, so i decided (this was back in like 10th grade) to cut out all filler words and just challenge myself to really just find ways to say what i wanted to say without cursing since then i've only cursed in i think 2 songs one i lost, and the other one i just did from the standpoint of battling someone so i was kinda more playing a part than being myself when i hear something really dirty i can't even listen to it some of my favorite songs just sit and collect dust because i really can't nod my head to such ridiculous language i can take cursing here and there but there's a limit what i really hate is when people say them over and over.. like i don't understand that.. its so... for me its like audio-rape.. like ur just nodding ur head to some music then they veer off into some ugly territory hopefully my blog is not too dirty for people if someone tells me it is then i will likely change it but i'm out 4 now me vs. boredom and anxiety Posted by poolboyjames on April 29, 2010 at 9:20 PM comments (0)i am so angry inside right now
i'm trying so hard to just chill i keep thinking about music school is so uninteresting to me its so boring like no joke it sometimes makes me feel like i'm dead inside that's what extreme boredom feels like.. like something inside of yourself is dying i just want good grades and i want to know that i never have todeal with these classes ever again my advisor was telling me i should re-take some classes just to help my gpa i was like "i'm gonna try to only take classes i have to take to graduate" i really wanted to say "are you fcking serious?" why in the fck would i want to re-take any of these stupid worthless classes? it was such a dumb suggestion, like i may not have a 4.0 but i'm not that desperate.. she is acting like taking these classes is FUN or something like sometimes i feel like school is such a struggle because its just so boring and like.. u know the thing that has bothered me the most this semester has been literature.. i've always loved writing and all that but this literature class has just been complete garbage like i miss music so much because i feel like school has sucked some life out of me.. like i want it back.. i want to wake up and know that i don't have to hear another hour-long lecture from a pretentious faggot with a horrible voice like ok i'm trying not to complain but i feel like i need to vent i seem to have some anxiety about exams like last semester our literature exam was to write 3 essays in one hour about a topic the teacher chose when ur used to writing one essay in 3 hours how in the fck do u write 3 essays in one hour? and i think we have to do that again for this upcoming exam!!!! i hate his class so much.. like it went from i hate his class to i hate him, like i can't stand to look at him.. every assignment has been so shitty i can't believe it its like if someone told u "go sit and write a scholarly essay about paperclips" that's what his assignments are like to me.. its just fluff and b.s. and it just bothers me.. like i don't know what it is.. on some level it shouldn't bother me.. it should just be, do the dumb assignment right? but after a while, the fact that the assignment is dumb begins to wear on me.. and i think that's overall what it is.. i just feel worn out.. just plain worn out.. like my patience (which is what allows me to deal with things i don't like) has been depleted and i don't know how to replenish it like i need a pick-me-up or some sort of recharge, or something so that i can finish my exams successfully ok i'm just gonna leave it at that i'm only going to talk positive from now on.. i can keep my composure, i will get really good grades, i will stay cool and i won't take my anger out on anyone.. i will make it work for my good i vented, now i'm going to just be positive ok peaCe retract that Posted by poolboyjames on April 27, 2010 at 10:56 PM comments (0)i am so tired of dealing with haters.. i don't even deal with haters but i go to youtube and people are leaving comments that are just ridiculous sometimes
i am gnna have to just not read comments anymore or something because the negativity pretty much disgusts me i don't like people being condescending or overly critical or whatever whatever.. it is just wrong if u guys come to my blog and u think i am ever hatin on someone or something then please let me know so i can not do that its like let me give an example i went to a lil wayne video on youtube right well someone commented like fck lil wayne u all need to listen to real sht like immortal technique WHAT DOES LIL WAYNE HAVE TO DO WITH IMMORTAL TECHNIQUE? the only similarity is the fact that they rap they are 2 totally different genres and like why do people go to soulja boy videos and say "this sht ain't real, wu-tang and nas are better" ...soulja boy isn't trying to be wu or nas!!! soulja boy is like 20 yrs younger than those guys so WHY ARE U COMPARING THEIR MUSIC this is my opinion on opinions: if u have strong opinions then do a blog.. that's it let that be your outlet stop going around trying to create arguments in places where there should only be appreciation focus your opinion into a complete thought and let it out and carry on with your life stop going around making ridiculous statements on youtube! hygiene Posted by poolboyjames on April 27, 2010 at 1:58 AM comments (0)have u ever met a bad breath person?
what is the deal with them? in a sense it shows u are kinda triflin if u have bad breathbecause u could have at least bought gum but u didn't when i was younger i did a little experiment i spoke to a bunch of people around school and asked them if they floss or not everyone with chronically bad breath answered "NO" here's the problem with that the things we have available to us in america are luxuries... people in other countries can't always have the best hygiene due to money constraints and convenience if u are blessed enough to be able to keep urself clean andbrush and floss and everything but u still don't do that then to me that is lazy whatevs my sentiments exactly Posted by poolboyjames on April 25, 2010 at 9:36 PM comments (0)out of boredom i just read a blog entry from diggy simmons
here's what he said (i'm cutting some things out to keep it short) How are you all? what have you been up to/working towards or on? I know a lot of you that come to this site aspire to be something.. so have you been on your grind? Well, Let me know, I'm interested because I've been on mine heavily. It may seem like a lot or even overwhelming but believe it or not i love my "work" days way more than the off days. I guess that's because I don't consider what I do to be work and in a previous TWEET I wrote on my twitter page on 3/5/2010 I quoted at 4:42 AM "UP & AWAKE Long day, but I live 4 these. What some would consider work I refer to as joy and what I love 2 do." And that's something that I really feel is true because I don't even feel as though my work is work I enjoy it and that's something I wanna live by for the rest of my life for real. I find it very sad when people don't even enjoy what they do and then that leads to living life sluggish and being depressed. (this is pool boy talking.. ADD BORED TO THAT!!!^^) I know some people don't even have the choice to pick their job and they gotta do what they gotta do, but if you do have that choice and if your young like me I'm encouraging you to grind now. You don't even have to necessarily start now; but make those beginning steps for the future. But on another note, I'm real excited for school to come to an end. I'm home schooled and have 4 hrs of it but, c'mon son.. who want's to be cooped up in a house/classroom? lol So in the midst of everything that's goin on I'm ready to put an end to my freshman year of high school lol. what i noticed about this entry is its exactly the same page i've been on for the past week or two i'm just tired of school and ready to start doing something i like again.. i.e. MUSIC i'm happy to have the opportunity to go to college but some of it is just kinda out of hand like for example i'm not getting points for this paper i have to do in literature but i still have to do it to pass the class "because the teacher says so" i'm just over it right now and i miss music.. i don't know if its because of spring weather or what but i feel like i'm just trying to get back to me for a while and do something i love rather than just achieve these mindless college tasks i have been in some bad moods lately n i think its cuz i'm so anxious for this school year to just end so i can do music and zone out in that area but don't get me wrong again, i am glad to be able to be in school.. in a week i should be just about done with this semester, thank the Lord pros n cons of accountability Posted by poolboyjames on April 25, 2010 at 2:24 PM comments (0)one thing i look forward to about one day being married is having an accountability partner
i look around and it seems like a lot of people hate that aspect of a relationship for me personally, that's one of my favorite parts in some ways when ur single u have nothing to live up to.. its just like whatever as a matter of fact just the other day i was watching a real estateshow and this real estate woman came in this guy's house and she said "ur place really neat and clean for a bachelor" and that whole stereotype of a messy bachelor exists because a single person has no one to be accountable to "take a shower? meh.. i don't have to" LOL ultimately having an accountability partner SHOULD make u a better person personally i value the giving and receiving of advice and perspective girls have their general knowledge and men have theirs in a good marriage u have both.. and it seems like u should have a strong unit that can accomplish quite a bit (such as the difficulty of having a child) anyway.. it kinda comes down to like.. which is better? ... a labor of love? or a life without labor? just some thoughts flows again Posted by poolboyjames on April 25, 2010 at 1:05 AM comments (0)the other thing thats been grabbing me has been hyperbole
i find it to be so entertaining cory gunz said on a song "i'm gonna stomp u til my feet show" when i heard that line i busted out laughing i love hyperbole.. its one of the greatest things of modern hip hop here's a good example of a song with some good hyperbole.. i'm talkin about juelz verses on this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WevDIZTxTm4 (if u listen, listen to the whole thing cuz juelz has 2 verses) he lists things that are big in scope and in importance "the rock of gibraltar is fallin on ya" he says "girls strapped to my dck like a harness" .. the "like a harness" is hyperbole he says "yall funny.. i'm bonkers" .. basically every statement he makes in this song is over the top that's what hyperbole is.. a grand exaggeration.. in real life its embellishment, maybe bordering a lie.. in hip hop its entertaining and humorous its not.. "i'm gnna shoot u" its.. "i'm gonna make u backflip out ur jordans" its not.. "i have a big penis" its.. "my dck could anchor a ship" so yeah.. hyperbole is another awesome thing i want to do on my next project peaCe |
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