rhyme stuff Posted by poolboyjames on April 30, 2010 at 2:42 PM comments (0)i was lookin at some stuff i wrote in class over the semester
i saw a few decent examples of what i want to do on my next cd here's some stuff i liked i'm alone at all times of the week/ i just zone and talk rhymes on a beat/ i don't pout about the plights that i live with/ i zone out and just write what i'm given/ a lone child with clear sight for my vision/ its on now in here, i'm gnna win this/ basically, what i like about this sort of style is the rhymes match in meter for each line and its not just the end of the line its each stressed word of each sentence.. the rhymes match in vowel sounds not necessarily consonants like analyze the first 2 lines for example i'm - a - lone - at - all - times - of - the - week/ i - just - zone - and - talk - rhymes - on - a - beat/ each vowel sound matches the one below it i hope to do this on my new project like throughout the whole thing as much as possible.. at the same time i hope to make sense, and tell stories and give some real substance i'm really hoping to be able to do some big things with my new project!!!! i feel like i've developed a signature rhyme style but i am hoping to basically take it much further this time!!!
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